Exedor is right.
This isn't Testgrounds! You can't just say "please rate my part of a thing that I haven't finished yet, and may never finish so it'll be an unfinished thing forever..." You have put us in a bind, and here's why:
This "animation" is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a story, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.
There have been lots of flash parts and bits coming thru recently. Newgrounds used to not put up with this sort of thing at all. The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.
If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is for.
Newgrounds is for FINISHED items. It's not good to have fragments floating around with people going, '...WTF is this??!?' when they find it.
Finish your projects and THEN submit them.