You've got potential, but remember, this is NewGrounds. Not TestGrounds.
People here aren't going to give short, boring poorly made flashes a good score.
You've got potential, but you're still missing a lot of stuff.
Backgrounds, uniqueness, humour and drawing skills.
You'll get better with time, but just try better next time. A lot better.
Your very right i shall improve i do time thanks for the feedback :D
Exedor is right.
This isn't Testgrounds! You can't just say "please rate my part of a thing that I haven't finished yet, and may never finish so it'll be an unfinished thing forever..." You have put us in a bind, and here's why:
This "animation" is a fragment. It's a piece of what could eventually be turned into a story, but for now, it's nothing more than a part or a bit.
There have been lots of flash parts and bits coming thru recently. Newgrounds used to not put up with this sort of thing at all. The problem is not if it's bad, but rather if it's good. When it's bad, it gets a low score and gets blammed and is forgotten and gone. Done.
If it's a 'good' piece, then people get confused and may pass it. The problem is that then we've got a fragment of a piece of a bit of a flash floating around newgrounds forever, and what's the point of that? That's not what Newgrounds is for.
Newgrounds is for FINISHED items. It's not good to have fragments floating around with people going, '...WTF is this??!?' when they find it.
Finish your projects and THEN submit them.
I know. My bad then, i'm used to submitting trailers before the work is complete to show others, what im working on. Next time, i'll submit the whole thing when it is fully complete.
I liked that it looped.
Pretty awesome flash, but it's lacking in a lot of things. Perhaps you could try using graphics from in game? And maybe the music, too? And when it explodes? It doesn't make a squiggly line, it makes block dissapear. Add some accurate and it really will be the truth!
Ganska häftigt blixt, men det är brist på en massa saker. Kanske kan ni prova att använda grafik från i spelet? Och kanske musiken också? Och när det exploderar? Det gör inte en snirkliga linje, gör det blockerar försvinna. Lägg till några riktiga och det verkligen blir sanningen! <3
I knock on the door of the house and die.
What a lovely game.
I hope you find some motivation and continue to work on it as it's got a lot of potential to be great. :D
Ya, stalling on the door too long will kill you. XD Lol aren't timers great. And I had been working on more animation before my computer crashed, just not all of it is uploaded up on newgrounds, only the good ones are. And I'm glad you like it, if you want to see more of what I was upto, you can always check out my Deviant art page, http://littlekittysilver. deviantart.com/ but that's only if you like.
An immense game with decent graphics and wonderful gameplay.
I didn't have any major issues with it (Other than ending up with far too much money after purchasing all upgrades).
The only thing i'd add to the game would be a Game+ mode, restart the game with all upgrades (or just the stats, even) and all the enemies are many times stronger.
Either way, great game, thank you for making it.
(And I wonder why it's getting so many wierd reviews!)
Thanks you =D
Buggy as fuck.
In a game where movement is what keeps you alive?
It makes it IMPOSSIBLE when the controls random die every so often.
Especially level #14. I know how to do the level. I've got that sorted out. But the character just fucking pauses randomly which causes death, after death, after death.
I play games on Newgrounds for fun, not to be annoyed constantly.
Otherwise? Beautiful graphics, audio and story.
Thats a pretty awesome Capella there Ninjkabat.
Though you should add some tonal and sub-frequency balancing, as it would match Surround Sound better.
Though Beautiful? Sadly No. =C
hehehe. I don't even know the first step of how to add tonal balancing or whatever. I just was messing around with Audacity, and this is what happened. It was enough of a challenge to get the sampling rate correct enough to submit it; I wouldn't expect much more sophistication than that.
Anyway, the title is BEATiful, not Beautiful. It's a play on words, kinda. I was looking to make a title that was rememberable, but not cheezy, which is actually harder than it sounds. Glad you thought it was Awesomriffitacularescentastical.
This is by far one of the best pieces of art I have seen on NewGrounds to date!
The streamlined and minimalistic colouring are clear representives of todays modern economy and ecology, lacking in life and passion as it stands still, waiting for prominite prospectors to se eit's inner beauty and cause it flow, whilst looking otherwise hopeless.
Truly, a hidden jem.
Thank you for uploading this wonderful image. Much appreciated! <3
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